Hatred is something you feel at some point in your life.Love will always be and happiness comes and goes,but Natasha did not believe in such a thing.She hated everything about her life.Nobody likes her at school,she was always called the "ugly one",compared to her beautiful,lovable twin sister Sasha.The differences between the sisters,Natasha had many gifts.She just had to discover them.
Natasha's alarm clock went off and she flew up.
"Oh no,I'm late."She thought,jumping up and almost flying to her scanty closet.She pulled on a raggedy pair of jeans,a horribly old shirt that barely reached her waist.Her black hair was tangled and fluffy.She had to pull it up in a ponytail,just so she would not have to grab a comb.That was when Sasha came in,dressed and looking perfect.
"I am SO sorry,Nata.I had to set the clock to get to work early.It's um Saturday,sorry."She said walking away and flipping her hair.
"I hate her so much."Natasha said through gritted teeth.She should stay up anyway,it was shopping day.She had to get to the mall.
When Natasha got to the mall,it was crowded.Chatty girls with hot boys and parents with babies.She did not fit in anywhere.Only at the Old Ladies Department.
"Hey,baby.How are you."Said a elderly lady Natasha often helped around the house.
"I'm fine Mrs.Johnson."
Natasha was stopped by to many elderly women.But the weirdness never stopped.At one stop,a boy was starring at her.He was cute,but why was he starring at her.He had messy black/brown hair,with a perfect angled face and he was dressed in all black.Natasha quickly left that place.
"Oh this is cute."She said pulling a black top from the rack.She went off to find a clerk to ask for a smaller size.When she rounded the corner the boy was there.Her heart started beating in her chest.Her mind made hot pictures of them kissing and snuggling.
"Hi."Natasha had not seen him approach.She blushed and answered back.
"You are really cute.Why were you shopping in the Old people place."She blushed harder.
"You don't get many complements do you."
"Thanks."She whispered.Oh god,heart please stop.The boy was dressed oddly,all in black,but not something modern people wear.No Adidas,Polo,Nikes.He was dressed like a knight of sorts.Black knee legth shorts,short sleeved shirt,combat boots.Noone seemed to notice the sheethed sword at his hip.
"I am not getting stuck in mess like this."She whispered.She muttered a bye and went back outside.She waited for Sasha in the freezing cold knowing she was out with some boy.Then,as if he flew,the boy fell from a tree on his feet.Natasha left out a scream and ran as he advanced.
Is it something you would read and how is it.Can someone give the boy a name.Please be honest and more ideas.Thanks
YES! it is very good i would totally read it and maybe jake or something old fashion but kinda mysterious.
I think it is actually interesting just try to separate the paragraphs more. Do you like my story
http://www.wattpad.com/1199135-venomouswaters-chapter1
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that was painful...
depressing
